I feel you there, bro.
That wasn't bad dude, you're on your way. LEt me give some CC to help you out.
The main drumline just went on and on without much of a variation. It made the drums very boring. The echo riff wasn't bad, just switch it up and make a bit of a flare with it. The drum samples where okay, I just felt that you used a very weak snare.
The bass was too quiet and not really bassy at all. It should be lower and more powerful. Also, the piano was completely out of place. You need to work on your composition. It needs to make me want to hear what's up next, not to know whats up next. Switch it up and use a few effects here and there to fill gaps.
Long story short, it bored me really. Work on what I've told you.= and you will get better.
Now go and review my shit ;)